I liked how your poem rhymed, and repeated the first sentence in every stanza too! Having the short stanzas kept me focused on the content. It was easy to follow. I do enjoy the imagery also. It makes me think of summer!
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Lacey
9/23/2013 12:08:23 am
I love this poem. Like, there's no other words for it. Love is a strong topic and the author hit it directly on the mark. I could also see the bright and happy imagery in the text, and that made me feel the heat on my skin and the butterflies in my stomach.
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Noah
9/23/2013 12:12:06 am
It is simple but it explains the topic.
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Regan
9/23/2013 12:14:09 am
This poem is so cute.
I love summer time, and sitting on the beach is my favorite thing to do, and it's always way better with someone else.
Fun poem!
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